This writer put a intro to every paragraph on this topic of this story and put what other people think about what was going on with the problem because it’s made in a journal style the way the writer put it up on the page. That the write didn’t have no quotation on the story from writing this information on this topic he just put the information on what was going on and how people feel, I really don’t have nothing to suggest to this reading I would of keep it the same to the readers.